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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2017 3:10 am 
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It's been out for a week now so soon it will time for some fuller reviews and more detailed discussion, but here I'll try and avoid spoilers.

For myself, I really like the main character's predicament, as she realizes the awful truth and the inescapable situation she's now (got herself) in and then everything happens so quickly to her and before she knows it she reaches "the point of no return", as her now-owner calls it. Great stuff, truly.

The secondary character meant nothing to me since I don't know the comic she's appeared in before. So I'm probably missing some of the detail of the comic. My focus and interest as a result was on the helpless blonde from the cover page. A pretty little thing. It's nice that she is essentially naked throughout the whole comic, no elaborate costumes for her, just stripped and exposed. The scene with her owner was the highlight for me.

And the cover page! When you see it in full on your screen, it's a beautiful thing! So simple, yet full of detail, very expressive, the pleading eyes. This is my favourite cover for sure.

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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2017 3:13 am 
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kobebryant187 wrote:
Which previous comic(s) was the main character and/or new her master in? Why don't I remember?!

if only we had wiki access ;)

I liked the comic as usual. It is great to see E showing off in strange ways. Here is a single scene comic that ACTUALLY HAS A PLOT. :P :P

A single scene comic well done but it has a downside ;) because it is focused on the two girls we don't explore the facility more. I love this facility and I want to see more of it. Another episode about this company perhaps?

I like the classroom scenes. There MUST BE A FULL COMIC ABOUT THAT.

I like how we see that rich character (no spoiler) under a different light. The language he is using was big turn on for me.

I like the big guy in the second half. He seems like a guy you should put in another comic.

I liked the post credit scene. I'm very interested in her fate. SF3 had a hint about that but I need more info :D


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2017 3:17 am 
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Mr Blackstock wrote:
The secondary character meant nothing to me since I don't know the comic she's appeared in before. So I'm probably missing some of the detail of the comic.
OK I think you had to read the first one to enjoy this comic twice as much. I think the main motivation behind this comic was the secondary character. This comic exists because of her. Of course there is a dilemma here for E. She couldn't have revealed the original comic that inspires this without ruining the surprise.


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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A single scene comic well done but it has a downside ;) because it is focused on the two girls we don't explore the facility more. I love this facility and I want to see more of it.

I like the classroom scenes. There MUST BE A FULL COMIC ABOUT THAT.

I like how we see that rich character (no spoiler) under a different light. The language he is using was big turn on for me.

I like the big guy in the second half. He seems like a guy you should put in another comic.


I agree with all of this. The language used by the rich owner absolutely makes that scene.

As for seeing more of the facility and the classroom: yes, but I'd still like to see BG:TNG first, and Fuckpuppet's pre-story :claire:

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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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The secondary character meant nothing to me since I don't know the comic she's appeared in before. So I'm probably missing some of the detail of the comic.
OK I think you had to read the first one to enjoy this comic twice as much. I think the main motivation behind this comic was the secondary character. This comic exists because of her. Of course there is a dilemma here for E. She couldn't have revealed the original comic that inspires this without ruining the surprise.

I see, thank you, that does put this comic in a very different light for me. The upside of having the back catalog to work through is that I still have about 12 E works ahead of me. The downside is this kind of thing when not following the chronology!

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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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I think we're feeling abuzz about the new comic and yet cautious about spoilers. It's a tricky kind of excitement!

I wanted to just take a moment to celebrate E for trying a challenging storytelling style and pulling it off nicely. Writing one continual scene probably wasn't easy, even with the flashbacks.

Well woven, and very fun. Bravo, E. And thank you!


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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You know, I made the spoiler tag available just for this. It's been 10 days anyway, so I think it is safe now.


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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Anyone get the move reference in this one. I couldn't find any


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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Me neither.


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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As an aside, I loved this comic and bought it day #1 like always but can we get some more bare feet next time?

You and Fernando are my two favorite BDSM artists, but in your last comics you kept the girls in socks/boots the whole time! Was a bit demoralizing. :-(

Thanks for any consideration!

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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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Well, I finally got HouseBreaking. And I have to say ‘OH FUCKING GOD!!! THIS IS SO HOT!!!’
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Where to start?

Well, I adored seeing what happened to our beloved Kim while she was out. :kim: How different it was from what I wrote. I love the background memories from Phil, it explains a lot. And the way he talked about her. God, I was so turned on by that.

And how Gregor used her. Her body like a sexy rag doll as he r@ped her. Fuck, I was so turned on.

And the classes to keep a woman safe were interesting. It made me think that my own character Big Tits could have done with some of those, she was far too spirited for her own good. Guess they do not give them out in the country.

Loved the ending. Sassy’s teacher one of the pups being tamed. All her smarts on keeping safe meant nothing. There she is another body to be sold.

I am panting after reading that.

Makes me wish I could have had a cameo in it.


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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Puppygirl-Jugs wrote:
I love the background memories from Phil, it explains a lot.

As in "she got what she deserved"?

I don't think that's what's happening here. We saw Kim's life from her point of view in SiT, and what we saw was the complete opposite of what Phil is describing here: A defeated, terrified and humiliated women that hated her job and all the things she had to do to keep it, but knew she had to cling to it at all costs because it was the only thing protecting her from being enslaved (for now). I think somebody mentioned it somewhere in this thread: Her behaviour as Phil describes it in Housebreaking seems out of character at first.

I think Phil's perception of Kimberly Muttson is 'somewhat' off, probably mostly fueled by envy, sexual desire that he couldn't act on so far and the idea that any women trying to stay a free slut is basically giving the entire system - and thus, the entire male gender - the middle finger. Not to mention a free slut with actual privileges, like the ones Kim apparently had.

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And the way he talked about her. God, I was so turned on by that.

I love Kim, but the way Butcher talks about Sassytramp - I don't think he ever talks *to* her - is easily one of the best porn dialogs ever.


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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TerminalWanderer wrote:
Puppygirl-Jugs wrote:
I love the background memories from Phil, it explains a lot.

As in "she got what she deserved"?

I don't think that's what's happening here. We saw Kim's life from her point of view in SiT, and what we saw was the complete opposite of what Phil is describing here: A defeated, terrified and humiliated women that hated her job and all the things she had to do to keep it, but knew she had to cling to it at all costs because it was the only thing protecting her from being enslaved (for now). I think somebody mentioned it somewhere in this thread: Her behaviour as Phil describes it in Housebreaking seems out of character at first.

I think Phil's perception of Kimberly Muttson is 'somewhat' off, probably mostly fueled by envy, sexual desire that he couldn't act on so far and the idea that any women trying to stay a free slut is basically giving the entire system - and thus, the entire male gender - the middle finger. Not to mention a free slut with actual privileges, like the ones Kim apparently had.

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And the way he talked about her. God, I was so turned on by that.

I love Kim, but the way Butcher talks about Sassytramp - I don't think he ever talks *to* her - is easily one of the best porn dialogs ever.


this. This is good writing from E. I think something like that was in the dialogue between Molly and Maggie in one of the BG episodes. Molly told stories about Maggie's mother making her sound way worse than she is. Also compare BG1 classroom scene and and the way Heather tells the story of it. subtle differences that show personal points of view.

I also agree about the Butcher scene. Just a little tweak and E turns an ordinary dialogue into a gem. kudos


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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I also agree with the comments about the excellence of the dialog in the Butcher scene. With just a slight regret that the blonde isn't called "it" throughout (a couple of times he says "she"). Taking things further, I almost regret that "it" is given a name at all.

This is certainly my favourite scene in the comic. I also like how Butcher is only interested in trying "its main fuckhole". He's not interested in e.g. hurting it anally or choking it via deepthroat, which we might often see, but just wants to check if, biologically, its pussy meets the particular standard he is looking for. This absolutely reduces it to a mere support organism for a pussy. Very nicely done.

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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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Excellent work as always. Loved it. Loved the cover.

It seemed like this comic was shorter than other ones (although that might not be true), but I wanted to say I enjoy the brevity. I would rather have shorter, mini-comics that cover specific themes if they were released more often (like monthly or bi-monthly).

And I agree with other posters: although the comic was excellent, it only whetted the appetite for those of us who want to see more of the training facility. There are so many possibilities for spin-offs, simply in the puppy girl narrative.

Although this comic didn't have any pregnant female breeders or milk cows, this is a theme I really appreciate E expanding on recently. I hope E continues to explore this.

How hot would it be to have a personal slave-chef who cooks Master a big breakfast in the morning, then promptly adds her own sweet tit cream to His coffee, fills His bowl of cereal with her delicious dairy, and then fills a large glass full of her warm, creamy milk for her Lord to chug?.....mmmmmmm


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It occurs to me that this comic answers a question that I thought I knew the answer to, but was wrong.

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Kim waking up and complaining about her chains and puppy gear and the pain in her ass. (My favourite image in the comic.) Now I had thought that was just because she had a tail plug stuck up it. But thanks to this ....

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We now know her ass was broken in again and again and again. All while she was out. (lucky bitch)

Watching Kim being handed around like a sexual ragdoll made me think that in my story of the lost scene viewtopic.php?f=5&t=1225 she gets off far easier. I guess I have a lot to learn about the proper treatment of unconscious slaves and the attitude of males towards them. ;)


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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Ah, that reminds me. Apparently I revealed the secret a year ago. All that "Blue Harvest" scheme was for nothing :)

http://www.erenischcomics.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=1226


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 Post subject: Re: Housebreaking
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I was waiting for one of those great reviews of OtherGuy to give my opinion on this wonderful new peace of narrative of Erenisch (oops, I said something ...), but as you have encouraged, I will add my bit.

Personally I think Housebreaking is a very risky bet on the part of the author, which shows his/her maturity in his/her work. The narrative rhythm is difficult and unique, based on real time that only breaks with different flashbacks, personally is something that praise but also makes the story feel short, lacking scene changes, although it is more than 40 pages. On the other hand, although it is not really necessary to know the previous comics, it is almost an obligation to do it to enjoy it completely which, although possibly this comic has one of the best dialogues so far, makes it difficult for those who start.

Although I enjoy the moment when the narrative is set (not so much as Puppygirl-Jugs, I'm afraid) I miss missing more about this slow process of re-education from a woman to a puppygirl and see more of the training facility and the different Cummypawns programs. I would also have liked to see smaller connections with SiT, like Juliette showing shame to have been previously recorded by Phil, as if she even thought she had a chance to escape her destiny or she will simply wonder why Kimberly Muttson has ended up in that situation (and by the way, she was envious of her being unconscious).

The truth is that reading my words seems like I'm complaining about the comic ... but I honestly love it. It is intelligent, exciting and engages from beginning to end. It is full of small details ... I will list only a few.

- The characteristic red heels of Kimberly Muttson. They are as protagonists as Kim herself in all the scenes.
- The three girls who are abused at first, are the same that accompanied Juliette in the Cummypaws van. That green shirt with the heart is unmistakable.
- I love the table witch the circles, one numbered for the head and two for the breasts.

I like that this comic has been created to please all who read you. Makes it a sincere gift, and shows us, the readers, how important we are to you, Erenisch. Thanks for that. You are great.


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This comic has got a place among my favorites; Enormous job!!

Just for me, it would improve even further if we get the chance to see our hero in her former life, getting all those lessons lived out, before getting too feisty!


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