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PostPosted: Mon Feb 06, 2017 6:44 pm 
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Hello.
I'm going to show here the scheme or idea of my own dystopia. There are the following common fetishes in: cardigan fetish, oldman/young girl, forced sex, domination, spanking and some BDSM. Time in my dystopia will be divided into few periods and there appear some terms: the Great Plan, the Better Order, Priority Privilage and Cardigan Compulsory Law. May I continue?


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 06, 2017 7:36 pm 
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LordCardigan wrote:
Hello.
I'm going to show here the scheme or idea of my own dystopia. There are the following common fetishes in: cardigan fetish, oldman/young girl, forced sex, domination, spanking and some BDSM. Time in my dystopia will be divided into few periods and there appear some terms: the Great Plan, the Better Order, Priority Privilage and Cardigan Compulsory Law. May I continue?

Yes, continue please.

I like young women in cardigans.


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Pullover sweaters are nice also.


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Mini sweater dresses are good too.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 8:14 am 
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Not sure if this counts as a sweater:



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PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 4:22 pm 
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LordCardigan wrote:
Hello.
I'm going to show here the scheme or idea of my own dystopia. There are the following common fetishes in: cardigan fetish, oldman/young girl, forced sex, domination, spanking and some BDSM. Time in my dystopia will be divided into few periods and there appear some terms: the Great Plan, the Better Order, Priority Privilage and Cardigan Compulsory Law. May I continue?


I must explain that I've got the cloth - fetish called "cardigan fetish" and this motive has to be included but let's come back to dystopia.

PRE - PERIOD:
The mankind feel the anxiety about demography. The customs start to change and become more conservative. One of the symptoms is the "Compulsory Cardigan Custom" (which soon becomes the law):
1. All proper girls and women are obliged to wear cardigans or have them with themselves.
2. They can be ordered by the mature and older generation to: button them up and put them on.
2. They need the permission for unbuttoning or taking them off.

Another current in the morality results in:
- recognition of domestic discipline against proper young women and girls,
- recognition of some forms of punishment like: soft bondage, a gag, closing in a separate room, different kinds of spanking, etc.

I think it's good for introduction :-)


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I've got the .. "cardigan fetish"

Cool.
Never heard about it; you learn something new everyday.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 9:19 pm 
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LordCardigan wrote:
I've got the .. "cardigan fetish"


Do you mean something like this?
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"Julia! Button all of them," barked Mr. Nowak, glaring at the new student from over the tops of his glasses. Julia, whimpering softly, wilted under the attention while fumbling with the buttons of her new cardigan sweater. Where she came from, proper young women did not have to wear cardigans. It had felt so soft -- as sensuous to the touch as silk -- when she first put it on. Now it felt as constricting as one of those whale-boned corsets she had read about in a romance novel.

It's not fair, thought Julia, her face pale as she finished the buttoning the sweater. In her haste, she missed buttoning one of the middle buttons.

"You missed one," said the teacher. "Now come up to the front of the classroom to be disciplined. I will not tolerate a student who has no self-control!"

"But sir," protested the shame-faced Julia, "I didn't know th..."

"Silence!" roared Mr. Nowak. "I will not tolerate excuses either. Now on your feet, young lady."

Stifling a response, Julia nodded, sniffling softly. She got up, and walked past the snickering and muttering students on either side of her, feeling the tears begin to start.

By the time she reached the front, she was sobbing in shame and humiliation, and was more than happy to bend over the desk so that she didn't have to look at the faces of her fellow students.

"No matter what, you will learn obedience, one way or another!" And with that, he started to spank her, his hand slapping hard against her skirt-clad bottom.

"OWWW!" Julia exclaimed, howling in shock and pain as Mr. Nowak's callused hand walloped her tender behind. By the time the spanking was done, she was crying and gulping.


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 9:47 pm 
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Never heard about it; you learn something new everyday.

Rule 34—"If it exists, there is porn of it – no exceptions"

For example: pen porn

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engulf_n_devour1 wrote:
Not sure if this counts as a sweater:


Lol! Great outfit for a slut, even if you're not a sweater fetischist.

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As someone who knits I'm intrigued. Not kink, just craft potential.

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engulf_n_devour1 wrote:
LordCardigan wrote:
I've got the .. "cardigan fetish"


Do you mean something like this?
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"Julia! Button all of them," barked Mr. Nowak, glaring at the new student from over the tops of his glasses. Julia, whimpering softly, wilted under the attention while fumbling with the buttons of her new cardigan sweater. Where she came from, proper young women did not have to wear cardigans. It had felt so soft -- as sensuous to the touch as silk -- when she first put it on. Now it felt as constricting as one of those whale-boned corsets she had read about in a romance novel.

It's not fair, thought Julia, her face pale as she finished the buttoning the sweater. In her haste, she missed buttoning one of the middle buttons.

"You missed one," said the teacher. "Now come up to the front of the classroom to be disciplined. I will not tolerate a student who has no self-control!"

Yes! Where have you found it? The only cardigan - fetish could be boring for other readers so it should be matched with spanking, bondage and other attractions :-)


"But sir," protested the shame-faced Julia, "I didn't know th..."

"Silence!" roared Mr. Nowak. "I will not tolerate excuses either. Now on your feet, young lady."

Stifling a response, Julia nodded, sniffling softly. She got up, and walked past the snickering and muttering students on either side of her, feeling the tears begin to start.

By the time she reached the front, she was sobbing in shame and humiliation, and was more than happy to bend over the desk so that she didn't have to look at the faces of her fellow students.

"No matter what, you will learn obedience, one way or another!" And with that, he started to spank her, his hand slapping hard against her skirt-clad bottom.

"OWWW!" Julia exclaimed, howling in shock and pain as Mr. Nowak's callused hand walloped her tender behind. By the time the spanking was done, she was crying and gulping.


Yes! That's it. Where have you found it? Using only the cardigan - fetish could be boring, so it should be matched with other fetishes like spanking, bondage, domination, etc.


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PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2017 3:45 pm 
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LordCardigan wrote:
Yes! That's it. Where have you found it? Using only the cardigan - fetish could be boring, so it should be matched with other fetishes like spanking, bondage, domination, etc.

Never throw away any of your writings, even if you never publish it. You never know when you can adapt it or use pieces of it for a new piece of writing.

I used a section of an old story and adapted it by using the unbuttoned cardigan as the reason for the discipline.

I agree that matching a particular fetish with BDSM fetishes can make a story more exciting. For instance, I like gynophagia fetish stories but I add BDSM elements when I write porn that I post on forums.


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LordCardigan wrote:
LordCardigan wrote:
Hello.
I'm going to show here the scheme or idea of my own dystopia. There are the following common fetishes in: cardigan fetish, oldman/young girl, forced sex, domination, spanking and some BDSM. Time in my dystopia will be divided into few periods and there appear some terms: the Great Plan, the Better Order, Priority Privilage and Cardigan Compulsory Law. May I continue?


I must explain that I've got the cloth - fetish called "cardigan fetish" and this motive has to be included but let's come back to dystopia.

PRE - PERIOD:
The mankind feel the anxiety about demography. The customs start to change and become more conservative. One of the symptoms is the "Compulsory Cardigan Custom" (which soon becomes the law):
1. All proper girls and women are obliged to wear cardigans or have them with themselves.
2. They can be ordered by the mature and older generation to: button them up and put them on.
2. They need the permission for unbuttoning or taking them off.

Ok, the origin of my fetish is for the next conversation. You can ask questions about the scheme of my dystopia. Let's go to the next period.

THE FIRST PERIOD:
There are less Young Men and Old Women. Instead there more Young Women and Old Men. The mankind stands in the face of degeneration. Old Men are rather set up against to Young Men who are in the minority. The Old Wives Association take the control and introduce the "Precedence Right (Nestor's Privilage):

- a man who is at the serious age (about or over 70);
- he is still (sexual) functional;
- because of his age or appearance he couldn't find his partner,

such one has the "Precedence Right" to:

- a young woman of the highest beauty criteria before other candidates.

Old Women and some of mature ones started to introduce "The Great Plan" which will stop the degeneration of mankind. Young women, just the proper ones, do not want to "help" and the OWA must force them to it.
Another current in the morality results in:
- recognition of domestic discipline against proper young women and girls,
- recognition of some forms of punishment like: soft bondage, a gag, closing in a separate room, different kinds of spanking, etc.

I think it's good for introduction :-)


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PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2017 7:19 pm 
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I have a couple of questions about THE FIRST PERIOD of your dystopia.

1) I like to make references to the Classics in my writings, so when I saw Nestor's Privilege it made me think of Nestor the Argonaut, who later became King of Pythos. In the Iliad, he is an old man that can still ride a chariot and lead his troops. Who did you name Nestor's Privilege after?

2) In the E-verse, the female population grows faster than the male. Which means there are more older men than younger men. Almost all of the females are young women because most don't make it past 30 years old (See Sluts in Training 1, Slave Fair 2, The Bottom, etc.).

In a society where it is mostly older men having children, more daughters are born than sons. Fathers over the age of 40 have about two daughters for every son born. https://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/the-scientific-fundamentalist/201104/why-are-older-parents-more-likely-have-daughters

And finally there is the polygyny and polyandry effect. More daughters are born in polygynous societies, and more sons in polyandrous societies. (See bottom of the post)

In THE FIRST PERIOD do you have a background reason why there are less Young Men and Old Women and there are more Young Women and Old Men?

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engulf_n_devour1 wrote:
I have a couple of questions about THE FIRST PERIOD of your dystopia.

1) I like to make references to the Classics in my writings, so when I saw Nestor's Privilege it made me think of Nestor the Argonaut, who later became King of Pythos. In the Iliad, he is an old man that can still ride a chariot and lead his troops. Who did you name Nestor's Privilege after?

2) In the E-verse, the female population grows faster than the male. Which means there are more older men than younger men. Almost all of the females are young women because most don't make it past 30 years old (See Sluts in Training 1, Slave Fair 2, The Bottom, etc.).

In a society where it is mostly older men having children, more daughters are born than sons. Fathers over the age of 40 have about two daughters for every son born. https://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/the-scientific-fundamentalist/201104/why-are-older-parents-more-likely-have-daughters

And finally there is the polygyny and polyandry effect. More daughters are born in polygynous societies, and more sons in polyandrous societies. (See bottom of the post)

In THE FIRST PERIOD do you have a background reason why there are less Young Men and Old Women and there are more Young Women and Old Men?

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Ad. 1. I also like the classic motives. I think the myth of Aphrodite is perfect to adapt to bondage/domination story. Maybe "New Aphrodite"? As to Nestor's privilige, it refers to the custom which will be changed into the rule:
- the Nestor (older, set up man) is the person who has the Priority Privilage,
- girls can not refuse to the Nestor's request,
- in case of the Nestor an accusation of harrassing does not exist (he only used his Privilage).

Ad. 2. As to statistical data ... I suggest leaving that. We create porn but literature not scientific essays. By the way the statistics are able to be interpreted as you like. It reminds me the propaganda of the USSR. "The growth of potatoes is bigger in this year of 100%" (yes, because there was one potatoe on each plant, there two ones next year so we've got 100%) :-)
There are always more women than men. Young women prefered to be singles, men who became rich are widowers or bachelors. Minority of young men feel adrift, effeminate or they still did not have a career. The situation needs improvment and the way for it is "The Great Plan" which will introduce "Better Order" which will become the fact in The Second Period.


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2017 7:38 pm 
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LordCardigan wrote:
We create porn but literature not scientific essays.


I understand. I will refrain from asking questions about the world building aspects of your story's dystopia.

What type of comments, questions, and feedback do you like to get about your stories?


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engulf_n_devour1 wrote:
LordCardigan wrote:
We create porn but literature not scientific essays.


I understand. I will refrain from asking questions about the world building aspects of your story's dystopia.

What type of comments, questions, and feedback do you like to get about your stories?


Oh sorry, maybe I was too harsh in my answer :-) I will read and try to answer all questions and comments. Even iif somebody doesn't like it, I will not be offended ;-)


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 10, 2017 2:50 pm 
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Oh sorry, maybe I was too harsh in my answer :-) I will read and try to answer all questions and comments. Even iif somebody doesn't like it, I will not be offended ;-)

Feel free to ignore any questions that you don't want to answer.

I don't think Erenisch has ever answered what originally caused the massive male/female birth imbalance in his E-verse.

The reason for the Nestor question is that I spend a bit of time coming up with the character names for my stories.

For instance, the reason the teacher, Mr. Nowak, has that name is because his actions and way of thinking are very foreign to Julia, his new student.

Nowak means foreigner, newcomer, or stranger. I was just wondering if you had similar reasons.


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 10, 2017 5:21 pm 
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"Nowak" is one of the most popular Polish surnames :-) (similar as Kowalski). So what now? Time for the second period or a short story connected with the first one? Is it possible to publish here your own cartoons?


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